Advertising Information

How to Make Your Claims Believable


When you hear claims like?

?Best Lawnmower in the country

?Absolute Lowest Prices In Existence

?Leaves your hair cleaner than any other shampoo

?do you believe them?

Or is there a certain degree of doubt in your mind about their credibility? Or whether they are 'hyped up'?

Think about it. Everybody expects advertisers to exaggerate their claims. To present them in their best light. Which is the exact reason why general statememts are not as effective as?

SPECIFIC STATEMENTS

So?

Rather than saying "Our prices have been reduced"? instead say? "Our prices have been reduced by 22% to prepare for our end of year stocktake"

Rather than saying "More than 20 varieties of Reebok shoes in stock"? instead say? "More than 23 varieties of Reebok shoes in stock"

Rather than saying "Our staff are very experienced carpet cleaners"? instead say? "Our team of 12 staff have a combined experience of cleaning carpets for 63 years"

Rather than saying "Used all over the world"? instead say? "Used in over 46 countries"

Or rather than a cleaner saying "We clean your house thoroughly" why not list every single thing you do

One more thing... When you give people a specific number, they tend to believe it must be true. So don't use numbers which are a multiple of 5 or 10. Instead say 4 or 9. It makes it more believable.

Even KFC realises this.

No. They don't have 10 herbs and spices on their special chicken. They have 11. That's a heck of a lot more believable than 10? or heaps, isn't it?

So take a moment now and think about how you can apply what you've learnt and be more specific in your advertising.

Warmly,

Scott Bywater Copywriting That SELLS
Level 12 / 418a Elizabeth Street, Surry Hills, NSW, Australia

Scott Bywater is a professional direct response copywriter and the author of Cash-Flow Advertising. To get a complimentary copy of his special report '7 Ways To Increase Your Turnover... No Matter What The State Of The Economy' (valued at $29.95) and a free subscription to his "Copywriting Selling Secrets" ezine, where you'll discover how to write ads and sales letters that make people line up and practically beg you to do business with them... visit his web site at http://www.copywritingthatsells.com.au


MORE RESOURCES:

SMU to launch graduate advertising program
Bizjournals.com, NC - 2 hours ago
Southern Methodist University is prepared to launch a graduate program in advertising that caters to students interested in social media outlets, ...


Gawker

A Lawyer’s Call for a Greater Black Presence in Agencies
New York Times, United States - 17 hours ago
By STUART ELLIOTT THE inability of the advertising industry to fill its desks, cubicles and offices with a diverse work force is coming under fire again, ...
Has the US Advertising Industry Forgotten About Blacks? DiversityInc.com (subscription)
Madison Avenue Accused of Racial Bias BusinessWeek
Racial Discrimination in the Advertising Industry Civilrights.org
Adweek - AdAge.com
all 23 news articles


guardian.co.uk

Atheist Bus Campaign is 'offensive', say complainants to ASA
guardian.co.uk, UK - 10 hours ago
The advertising regulator has received nearly 50 complaints that an atheist ad campaign, proclaiming "There is probably no God. Now stop worrying and enjoy ...
'No God' campaign draws complaint BBC News
Christians demand proof for atheist ad claims in Britain AFP
Christian group in UK challenges atheist ad campaign Catholic Culture
Scotsman - Times Online
all 509 news articles


mocoNews.net - Microsoft Plunges Into Mobile Advertising With ...
Washington Post, United States - Jan 7, 2009
The second thing to point out is the vote of confidence on Microsoft's behalf that they believe the the mobile search and advertising market could be of ...
Verizon Wireless Selects Microsoft for Mobile Search and Advertising PR Newswire (press release)
Microsoft Picks Verizon Over Google, Yahoo For Search, Mobile Ads eWeek
Google Is Far From Safe BNET
Mobile Burn - Geek.com
all 320 news articles


From an advertising section
San Jose Mercury News,  USA - 2 hours ago
Big marks for small-car safety: An increasing number of Americans are trading in their large sport-utility vehicles after feeling the sting of ...


Campbell announces new head of advertising
SmartBrief, DC - 2 hours ago
She replaces Paul Alexander, who left the company in October, and will oversee all of Campbell's advertising. Advertising Age (01/08) Want to dig deeper? ...
Campbell Soup appoints new VP of global advertising and design Trading Markets (press release)
Campbell Soup Co. lowers sodium in line for kids MSNBC
all 6 news articles


Radio late to the feel the pinch on advertising
Sydney Morning Herald, Australia - 7 hours ago
RADIO has proven to be more resilient than newspapers and television stations during the economic crisis, posting largely steady advertising revenue in 2008 ...
Adland awaits Gerry Harvey's will The Australian
Ad downturn continues to hit Fairfax The Age
More listening to the radio in tough economic times The Australian
The Australian
all 42 news articles


ck one Launches a New Worldwide Advertising Campaign
PR Newswire (press release), NY - 1 hour ago
The campaign was directed by Trey Laird of Laird + Partners in conjunction with Calvin Klein, Inc.'s in-house creative studio, CRK Advertising. ...
Wedbush Morgan Downgrades Phillips-Van Heusen (PVH) to Hold StreetInsider.com (subscription)
all 14 news articles


Wedbush Morgan Initiates Coverage on Lamar Advertising (LAMR) with ...
StreetInsider.com (subscription), MI - 4 hours ago
Wedbush analsyt says, "A pure play on good long-term growth trends in the US outdoor advertising industry. Would revisit stock in anticipation of turn in ...
Wedbush Morgan Initiates Coverage on Clear Channel Outdoor (CCO ... StreetInsider.com (subscription)
Wedbush Morgan Initiates Coverage on National CineMedia (NCMI ... StreetInsider.com (subscription)
all 3 news articles


Reuters

Why Don’t Newspapers Do a Better Job of Advertising?
New Yorker, United States - 14 hours ago
Of course, they’re serious about the advertising they print, and I presume they hope that their advertisers believe that big ads work to garner customer ...
Video: Money Minute: Times Ads, Hyundai, Construction AssociatedPress
US: Newspapers adopt front-page advertising editorsweblog.org
Globe joins papers selling front-page ads Boston Globe
Reuters - The Associated Press
all 374 news articles

Advertising - Google News

home | site map
© 2006